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Wednesday, 3 November 2021

T4W2 Writing. Lockdown Writing.

 This is my writing work for the week. It is all in my imagination.

When I Went into space.


I was just sitting there, on the beach, relaxing. And then suddenly my imagination went away with me and I suddenly found myself in space. I panicked, I flailed, but there was nothing to hold onto, to pull me back. Then I suddenly thought. Wait, I can’t be in space, it must just be my imagination. So then I thought, if this is my imagination then I am fine, I am not in space. So I realized, I can breathe! It still took a lot of determination, imagine how hard it would be to stop holding your breath when your body is telling you that you will die if you do! Finally I stopped. Whew, I was fine! Then I realized that I could send myself back. I imagined myself back. But it didn't work! Now I was scared. If I couldn't get back then I would be stuck here forever. Although I realized I probably would be able to get out of this, I must try to use my imagination while I am stuck here. I realized that as this was my imagination I could create the best waterpark ever, and have fun playing in it! I imagined it and suddenly I was at the top of a giant waterslide. I hopped into the waterside and whoosh I was away. Down, Down, Down I speed. It was exhilarating, it was scary, it was exciting. Flying down the slide it all passed in no time at all. Next I went into the wave pool. The wave pool was almost better than the waterside. I wished I had a board and suddenly I did. I started riding the waves. Suddenly one of the waves tipped me up. I looked up and saw the sky, not space! I was so surprised that I fell off my board. My imagination, well I can’t realy describe it. The waterpark kind of collapsed! Suddenly I found myself back in the real world. It was a scary experience but not one that i’m going to soon forget.

Did you like my writing? I thought it was cool.

1 comment:

  1. Lovely piece of writing Robert. Great use of commas and descriptive vocabulary.
    Miss Hudson

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