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Friday, 12 November 2021

When I Take My Pet Out

 This is my writing work for the week. Unlike my main work I did not like this. 

When I Take My Pet Out.


I decided one day to take my personal pet and go somewhere new. It started off great. We were having fun. My pet was getting out to a new space and he was getting new seeds from the tree. A couple of times he flew away to drop the seeds off but I wasn’t worried. I knew that he would come back soon. Next we went to a stream, I splashed in the stream while my pet ( which is a bird by the way) kept on flying around. Next we went to a National Park. My bird really seemed to like this place so I made a note to myself to come back here soon. I did a two hour walk and it was really fun. It took a while but me and my bird persevered. Finally we finished the trip and we got back to the parking lot. Then we drove home. On the way we went to a petrol station to fill the car up. Then Finally at the end of the adventure, we went home.

Did you like my writing? I did not really like writing it.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Robert,
    I can tell it was not your favourite theme of writing. You have still selected some good word choices.
    Miss Hudson

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