This is my writing work for the week. Unlike my main work I did not like this.
When I Take My Pet Out.
I decided one day to take my personal pet and go somewhere new. It started off great. We were having fun. My pet was getting out to a new space and he was getting new seeds from the tree. A couple of times he flew away to drop the seeds off but I wasn’t worried. I knew that he would come back soon. Next we went to a stream, I splashed in the stream while my pet ( which is a bird by the way) kept on flying around. Next we went to a National Park. My bird really seemed to like this place so I made a note to myself to come back here soon. I did a two hour walk and it was really fun. It took a while but me and my bird persevered. Finally we finished the trip and we got back to the parking lot. Then we drove home. On the way we went to a petrol station to fill the car up. Then Finally at the end of the adventure, we went home.
Hi Robert,
ReplyDeleteI can tell it was not your favourite theme of writing. You have still selected some good word choices.
Miss Hudson