T4W2 Writing Persuasive Letter to the Auckland Council.

 This is my second piece of writing for the week.

Persuasive Message to the Auckland Council.

23 ray small drive,

Papakura,

Auckland,

NZ

Auckland Council,

Auckland,

NZ.

Dear Auckland council. I am writing to you to try and persuade you to let me build a Fort/Pa next to the inlet. This will be good for the following reasons that I am about to list.

Number one. The first reason is that people will be getting outside. It is a way to convince people that we need to be getting outside and this will help them. 

The second reason is that It is a pa. This is a maori structure which makes it cultural. The reason we have museums is because we want people to know about the past. What better way to do this than by making something that is fun and also educational.

My third and final reason is that we need more playgrounds. We don’t have enough playgrounds in the outside space. What’s more, the ones we do have are alot like each other. What I propose is not only another one but it is also a new one.

These are my reasons for why we should make a playground like that.

Did you like my writing? I didn't really like making this but it's nice to be done.