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Tuesday, 19 October 2021

T4W1 Writing Lockdown Work

 This is my work for the week. This week I had to do two pieces of writing this week. They will go in the order that I made them.

Why My Changes to the Pahurehure Inlet is Important


My changes to the pahurehure inlet are important because we have a lot of plastic in the inlet. I think these changes will help with that problem.


First off the filter system. The filter system will remove any plastic coming in through the filter and it will filter it out into a chute that will then take the plastic to be recycled.


Next We should put a lot and I mean a lot of rubbish bins around the inlet. This I hope will lessen the amount of rubbish entering the inlet from people’s output.


Thirdly we should get a big tidy up of the rubbish in the inlet after we have done all this. This will make it clean and then I hope a lot of people will take care to recycle rubbish and leave it out of the inlet.

 

This is why my project will help the inlet.




23 Ray Small Drive,

Papakura,

Auckland,

NZ


19th October 2021


Auckland Council,

Auckland,

NZ


Dear Auckland Council,


Do you know about the Pahurehure Inlet problem? The inlet is part of our culture and we are letting it get polluted. I am writing to you to ask you, and try to convince you to help, with how polluted our inlet is getting!


 

Every day more and more rubbish piles into the inlet from various places. You can help by stepping up and making a plan. All you need to do is make a filter system at all the entrances to the inlet and maybe make a fine for littering.



You could also be a great help if you just increase the amount of rubbish bins around the inlet so that people will have an easier place to put their rubbish. The auckland council was made to take care of the people and the environment.  This is only one of the many problems that you have been inactive with. 


You started a project about 10 years ago. My ancestors were part of that project, and they were, are still proud of it. You should finish what you started all those years ago.


Help the environment, help the people.

With sincerest regards,

Robert.


Did you like my work? It was hard to make two pieces of writing but I managed it.




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