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Thursday, 28 October 2021

T4W2 Writing Persuasive Letter to the Auckland Council.

 This is my second piece of writing for the week.



Persuasive Message to the Auckland Council.


23 ray small drive,

Papakura,

Auckland,

NZ


Auckland Council,

Auckland,

NZ.




Dear Auckland council. I am writing to you to try and persuade you to let me build a Fort/Pa next to the inlet. This will be good for the following reasons that I am about to list.


Number one. The first reason is that people will be getting outside. It is a way to convince people that we need to be getting outside and this will help them. 


The second reason is that It is a pa. This is a maori structure which makes it cultural. The reason we have museums is because we want people to know about the past. What better way to do this than by making something that is fun and also educational.


My third and final reason is that we need more playgrounds. We don’t have enough playgrounds in the outside space. What’s more, the ones we do have are alot like each other. What I propose is not only another one but it is also a new one.


These are my reasons for why we should make a playground like that.


Did you like my writing? I didn't really like making this but it's nice to be done.


T4W2 Writing How to make a minecraft Pa/Fort

 How To Make a Minecraft Pa/Fort



  1. Lay down six oak wood blocks.

  2. Place one block next to it then put one block on top of that.

  3. Continue building along the row.

  4. Repeat the steps 2-3 until your pa is 5 blocks high.

  5. Crop all the other blocks that are not on the diagonal.

  6. Place on block next to the ones on top.

  7. Continue this until there are 3 layers of blocks on top.

  8. Now start building down.

  1. Continue until you are back at the ground.

  2. Place a fence post.

  3. Continue placing fence posts until there is a wall of fence posts.

  4. Now hollow out the 2 blocks in the middle for a door also you can hollow out other blocks for windows.

  5. Do the same at the back except without the door.

  6. If you want you can place torches inside or outside.

  7. Now you're done. Enjoy your Pa/Fort.

T4W2 Reading Work.

 This is my reading work for the week. I hope you like it.

Did you like my work. This took me a while to make.

Tuesday, 19 October 2021

T4W1 Writing Lockdown Work

 This is my work for the week. This week I had to do two pieces of writing this week. They will go in the order that I made them.

Why My Changes to the Pahurehure Inlet is Important


My changes to the pahurehure inlet are important because we have a lot of plastic in the inlet. I think these changes will help with that problem.


First off the filter system. The filter system will remove any plastic coming in through the filter and it will filter it out into a chute that will then take the plastic to be recycled.


Next We should put a lot and I mean a lot of rubbish bins around the inlet. This I hope will lessen the amount of rubbish entering the inlet from people’s output.


Thirdly we should get a big tidy up of the rubbish in the inlet after we have done all this. This will make it clean and then I hope a lot of people will take care to recycle rubbish and leave it out of the inlet.

 

This is why my project will help the inlet.




23 Ray Small Drive,

Papakura,

Auckland,

NZ


19th October 2021


Auckland Council,

Auckland,

NZ


Dear Auckland Council,


Do you know about the Pahurehure Inlet problem? The inlet is part of our culture and we are letting it get polluted. I am writing to you to ask you, and try to convince you to help, with how polluted our inlet is getting!


 

Every day more and more rubbish piles into the inlet from various places. You can help by stepping up and making a plan. All you need to do is make a filter system at all the entrances to the inlet and maybe make a fine for littering.



You could also be a great help if you just increase the amount of rubbish bins around the inlet so that people will have an easier place to put their rubbish. The auckland council was made to take care of the people and the environment.  This is only one of the many problems that you have been inactive with. 


You started a project about 10 years ago. My ancestors were part of that project, and they were, are still proud of it. You should finish what you started all those years ago.


Help the environment, help the people.

With sincerest regards,

Robert.


Did you like my work? It was hard to make two pieces of writing but I managed it.




T4W1 Lockdown Work.

 This is my lockdown work for the week. I hope you like it.

Did you like my work? This is my first week back from the holidays.