T3W3 Persuasive Writing.

 This is my writing work for the week. It is a persuasive piece of writing. It is called Sport vs Music.

Sport VS Music

I think that sport is better for you than music because it increases your fitness and can make you new friends.

Firstly sport increases your physical body making it fitter and stronger. It can also help with your health and increase your resistance.

Secondly, sport enables you to challenge yourself. You can try many different things through sport that you cannot do through music. As well as that it increases your teamwork.

Finally it could make you world famous. People could become very famous if say in rugby they scored the winning try of the Olympic gold medal match. They will have got a gold medal and have become world famous. That is simply something you just cannot achieve through music.

 

So I think this supports my earlier theories. Again, I still state that sport is better than music.

Did you like my writing? I think that persuasive pieces of writing are fun to write.