T3W2 Bike Track.

 This is my writing work for the week. It is a persuasive letter.

23 ray small drive,

Papakura,

Auckland

NZ.

5th August 2021

Principal,

Papakura Central School,

Auckland,

NZ.

Dear Mr Tetzlaff.

I am writing to you to ask you if you can move the part of the bike track next to the hill. This will then allow us to use the slip’n’slide down the hill.

Firstly as I have already stated, moving the bike track will enable us to use the slip’n’slide down the hill. I strongly believe that this will make EOTC more enjoyable.

Secondly if you move it, it might open up opportunities for different paths or turns to make the track funner. The track is mainly turns and straights; it does not split into two tracks often. If you add more intersections it will make the bike track more popular.

Finally people rolling/running down the hill can do it much more safely if you just move the bike track. People rolling/running down the hill will have to stop much sooner thus ruining the experience. Again I repeat, IT IS SAFER! If you value safety you will move the bike track!

So that is my perspective. I think you now realise that it would be prudent to move the bike track. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Robert.

Did you like my persuasive letter? I found it very hard to write a letter and make it persuasive. Do you have any advice for writing persuasive letters?