This is my piece of persuasive text and it is on if we should have a school uniform.
I think we should not have a uniform because it costs a lot. I costs a lot more to buy a uniform than a piece of normal clothing. There are also less shops that you can buy a uniform than a normal piece of clothing.
There are not many different types of uniforms like there are only one type of jumper. If you don't like it there is no other type to use.
The uniform is not that comfortable. Most mufti is much more comfy than the uniform. So in the end I think that we should not have a uniform.
Do you agree with me or do you think that we should not have a school uniform? I think that we should not have a uniform because of the reasons listed above. Also there is less freedom in a uniform than in plain mufti. It shows that we are individual.
Hi Robert good job with your writing. Next time I think you should add maybe a rhetorical question like do you want to or something like that because the reader will feel maybe we shouldn't wear a school uniform. But good job on the work.
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