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In my hand I felt oily hot chips. I could hardly hear anything clearly because the crowd was so loud. I quickly finished the chips and looked around. I looked at all the stalls and thought about where to go next.I saw a stall advertising games and books. I made a mental not to go there before I left. I saw a store selling lollies. I hadn't seen any other stalls with prices this cheap so I went there. After standing in the line for ages I finally left with the goodies. Monevering through the crowd was a problem the crowd was so packed that I had a tough time getting a few meters in 20 seconds. Finally I left and I was really happy to finally get away from all that noise. Even though that noise offerd such oily chips and sweet candy floss with many oily smells.