This is my work for the week. It is a imaginary story about me going back to the time and place of ancient Egypt.
The machine thudded onto the ground. Tentatively I opened the machine and looked around. I realised that I must be in a market place. I looked around again relising that I must be in ancient Egypt. And the heat . I thought it was hot when it was 25 degrees but this was 40 degrees. I noticed that some people were trickling off to the side. Soon that trickle turned into a flow. Thinking that they may be going to some meeting place I followed them to see where they were going. When they stopped moving I finally looked around. We seemed to be in a large room. The door, well i'm calling it a door was huge. When it was closed it would almost be impossible to open without at least ten people. Than the Pharaoh or at least the leader of this Nome talked to the people. I couldn't understand it but the people seemed energized. Then with a final word speaker stepped down and the people left. As I walked back to my craft I wondered where I would go next. Then I hopped into my craft and I smiled.\
Did you like my writing? I think I did okay this time. If you have any questions please respond.
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