fireworks

we were making a firework poem this is what I made.
Fireworks.
Fizz boom pop go the fireworks in space. Fireworks there fireworks here. Bursting multicolored explosions in the sky.
The sound of fireworks sizzles in the sky
Dazzling brightness illuminates the dark.
The sound of fireworks when they explode crackle pop.
Neon and electric colors water the sky.
Fireworks for you and me.

i think it is really easy but to make it really good you have to make connections. what is the hardest part for you about writing poems and how do you make that less dificult.